6. Claim: The ingredients in candy bars are unhealthy and do not make it hard for students to concentrate and sit still during class.
Evidence: One popular candy bar is made from water, corn syrup, butter, vanilla extract, peanut butter, salt, sugar, caramel, peanuts, and chocolate chips.
Warrant: The ingrendient on candy bars are always going to be unhealthy or else they would be called healthy bars. The reason that candy bars are always going to be unhealthy is because they have so much sugar in everything that has been added and there is no real healthy ingredients put in them because they are put in large quantaties and there is no moderation. Eventhough the ingredients in them are not healthy they do not make it hard for students to concentrate during class because for some it doesnt do anything because their body is so used to them or for others it makes them concentrate more because of all the sugar that a candy bar has because the sugar makes them be more attentive.
Because the candy bars contain so manny unhealthy ingredients, empty calories,and massive amounts of sugar, candy bars tend to give students stomach aches,head aches, and lower thier immune systems so that students will get sick easier. Therefore with all these possible symptoms occuring in a students body, they surely will not be able to cooncentrate during class.
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